She spins endless dreams,
and fuels unspoken desires.
Her charming gait
captures your attention,
Her mysterious eyes
dare you to be bold.
She is shrewd and wicked,
Yet prude and spirited.
Her love is addictive,
it runs in your blood.
Her presence is encouraging,
it drives you nuts.
She is always there with you,
In love, hate, smile , tear,
loneliness, company, joy and fear.
Her intoxicating curves,
her lovely glance,
you feel the lady luck has smiled,
trance isn't far than a mile.
She has her ups and her downs,
has known struggle and charm,
her eyes still promise a dream,
over the horizon,
under the helm.
the one with many lovers,
they can't be away from her,
she runs in their veins.
She is the sultry mistress
She runs in their veins.
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeleteWell, well, capturing the mistress in words so beautiful, you are intoxicating the souls with her charm...
Perfectly blended...Luved it...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
p.s. - this only makes it difficult for me gal... :)
Hey Sneha...that was beautiful !!! Loved it !!!
ReplyDelete@Eon : ;) Thanks a lot :) I am happy you loved it! I really wanted to bring out the image that we were discussing
ReplyDeleteP.S I just tried to make things easier for you, so now whenever you miss, read this :P
@Supa: Thanks a lot dear! The appreciation means world to me! :)
If this was facebook, I would click "Like" and say, nice and thoughtful!
ReplyDeleteIt is filled with passion!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!!
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@Lalit: that was by far your most appreciating comment! :) thanks a lot, will try to squeeze out more such comments from you!
ReplyDelete@Gaurav: thanks a lot :) :)
good description of mumbai.....really a sultry mistress
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot @Deguide :)
ReplyDeletevery nice.. the poetry justified and made more beautiful by the images! a lovely take!
ReplyDeleteLeo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
wow...what a beautifully penned work :) Mumbai is a rocking place no doubt...a sultry mistress is very apt indeed! wonderful job done!
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@Leo : Thanks!!! :)
ReplyDelete@Sarah: :) thanks!!
beautiful description through beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletelovely words :)
ReplyDeleteWow..lovely poem.. :) gud description about her.. :)
ReplyDeletesultry mistress... fantastic!
ReplyDelete@Pratibha: she is beautiful, so nothing less than beautiful words could be used to describe her :) Thanks!!
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@Madhumati: Thanks a lott!!
@Doc : :) :) Thanks!!
nice looking post and nice looking pictures also >>> good work keep going!!
ReplyDeleteJai HO mangalmay hO
I like the quick pace of this poem, like the intro shot of a movie
ReplyDeleteThough i am not a poetry kind of person but the images and the words matched very nicely...the title does the rest..
ReplyDelete@ Vish : thanks!
ReplyDelete@Shafeeq : :) thanks :)
@Perception : thanks, am happy you liked it :)
now thats really some sultry diva :P
ReplyDeletebrialliant descriptions.
I've lived in Mumbai for more than 3 years, never saw her this way. You've got a Delhite remembering and imagining his stays in Mumbai!
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@Rajlakshi : :) ;) :P Thanks!!
ReplyDelete@Aseem : That was humbling :) thanks!!
loved the rhythmic lilt in it!
ReplyDeletevery lyrical!!
@Deepak : :) thanks!
ReplyDeletebeautifully crafted!! remind me of my fav poem by MAYA AGNELOU
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@Red Handed : Thanks a lot dear :)
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