22:08 pm

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Did she really mean that? Its past her bedtime, I guess she was sleepy when she sent that message. However, sleepy or not sleepy, did she say that on impulse? No, I agree she is impulsive but I do not think she would be impulsive in this matter. I guess, I should ask her to sleep over it, think about it again and let me know if she feels the same tomorrow morning.

Go to sleep Alisha. Don’t think about it right now. Sleep over it. Let me know if tomorrow you feel the same.

Message Delivered to:
Alisha
9841184537

Date and Time:
5th Jan 2011
23:10

Received 1 new Message

I know what I am talking about and I will feel the same tomorrow morning.

Sender:
Alisha
9841184537

Sent:
5th Jan 2011
23:12

I hope she thinks about it, I hope she considers her answer. I am serious about her; I hope she has not replied on impulse. I don’t earn a lot, but I can keep her happy. I want to. I can sing a song or two. I can cook occasionally and will help her whenever she requires my help. I love making her laugh; just cherish the sound of her laughter. I want to live with her, take care and keep her happy. I love pulling her leg and then cajoling her. I hope to be the reason behind her smile and laughter for the rest of our lives. I want to. She is very special to me and I haven’t been crazy about anyone as much as I am about her. Standing among the crowd, I miss her! Hanging out with friends, I miss her! Attending friend’s birthday, I miss her! Being at friend’s wedding, I miss her! How I wish I could share every moment of my life with her!

She is very special to me, I cannot explain how special but when I say that she is the most special person of my life I hope I am able to express how special she is to me. Her voice is the best sound of my world and talking to her makes my day. She is very important to me and I wish, Oh how I wish it were the same case with her.

Shaan just can’t stop thinking about Alisha and her message and repeatedly reads it. He is hoping for a positive tomorrow.

So? She loves me. She loves me not.

Message Delivered to:
Alisha
9841184537

Date and Time:
6th Jan 2011
12:10

Received one new message

I still feel the same…

Sender:
Alisha
9841184537

Sent:
6th Jan 2011
12:12

Shaan goes back to her message that she had sent last night at 22:08pm where she had finally told him what she feels about him.

Shaan, you are very special to me.
I love you.

Sender:
Alisha
9841184537

Sent:
5th Jan 2011
22:08

Life is Good. Yes, I love that slogan



Sneha

12 comments:

  1. aww...very cute..she loved him!!!
    u penned it so creatively, new style and i must admit i loved it :)
    keep it up!

    sarah

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  2. well the way you have written is too good..your blog is alwaz so creatively colored... :)

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  3. Thanks a lott Sarah, I will try my best to dish out good work! :)

    Thanks a lott Namit, I will try my best to keep it up!

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  4. Hey, Hi
    well i didnt get the time to read the first half of the post when u posted it, but glad that i did catch up with it today...
    Nice style of writing that you got here..liked the way you played with the readers mind till the end and revealed the climax...perfectly executed...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  5. @TheSilhoutte:

    Hie,

    Thanks a lot, I like to keep readers glued and guessing till the last sentence. I am happy you like my style! Thanks for reading it and commenting it. It was really nice of you :)

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    Regards,
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  9. hey i simply loved it.Its an awseome piece of writing and it creates an enthusiasm and excitement in the minds of the reader. Keep up your work .

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  10. @Meh and Silhouette : thanks a lot!! :)
    @koolgal : thanks dear, I will try my best. :)

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  11. Oh loved it.. its so beautifuly written one, we do hav these confusions once in a while in real life..

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  12. @Devil Incarnate : thanks dear :) Confusion na ho woh life hi kya hai? :)

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